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SuperJory-[:
08-17-2008, 01:09 AM
This is my story about my RPG character Fizzy! :]
It basically how she became who she is today.

I walked quietly on the dimly lit path, not paying attention to where it leads or what was around me. The only thing I was focused on was going forwards. A distant rustle shook me out of my near trance. I glanced around the dark trail. Looking at every possible spot. The noise faded and I continued walking straight. A glimmer of light from the moon was my only sense of where I was going. The bag on my shoulder was feeling heavier and heavier by the minute so I decided to sit down. I pulled out my cell phone and read the clock, 12:34 AM. I decided that was far enough for tonight and I pulled out my sleeping bag. I dragged it all out of sight behind a giant willow tree. I sipped into the pink bag and glanced up at the stars. The tiny white specks glittered in the night sky as I slowly drifted into a heavy sleep.

Roxy_Berry
08-17-2008, 01:12 AM
lul ur innglesh is lyk gud!!!!!1
beta dan mai!! ur rly diskriptiye n i luv ur stori!!!1!!!11eleven

SuperJory-[:
08-17-2008, 01:17 AM
Roxxi- Most definatley not... :] You are very good at English!
Well I have to be somewhat good at it cause its my only language...
...Exept a couple of words in spanish.....

HelloKitty09
08-17-2008, 02:52 AM
CooooL story! I couldn't do better.

hunnybee1992
08-18-2008, 04:16 PM
it's cool!
i like it =3