which do you like better?

[hunnybee1992]

Okay, so I'm writing a story, and I wanted to post it on here and Fanfiction, but I didn't know which one to post ;p
So I want your opinion on which you like better ^.^

1) Pop Princess
When 17 year old Kaitlynn hits it big, she thinks she has it all figured out. Her modeling career is at it's peak, her acting is soaring, and her music has taken off.
You would think that she had the "polaroid perfect" life. Think again. When her parents die in a paparazzi - related accident, all she wants is to get away from it all.
So she decides to leave her busy New York life for a quiet, normal life in Tokyo. Not much of a difference, but no one knows her there.

Or so she thought.

When she starts high school, a boy named Souske takes notice. The more he hangs around her, the more he realizes who she really is.
Can she lead a normal high school life and keep her American past under wraps?


2) The Band
This is the story of a girl. A girl named Lily Vancouver. She's not the prettiest girl in the world, but she's smart. That counts for something, right?
Not in this story!
What counts is her amazing voice - flawless when compared to an angel's.
But enough about that. Most of [or all of] the story takes place in good - ole San Fran [Sna Francisco for all of you that don't know] after Lily is asked to sing for Suicide on a Satanic Holiday, her ex Steve's band.
So what happens when you get a rookie singer, a singer's ex that plays guitar, a gay drummer named Sam, a crazy keyboardist named Kiki, and an emo bass player named Ricky?

The Band!

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so now i have started Pop Princess, but I'm working on starting a forum for The Band, since a lot of you like it so much ^^

[HelloKitty09]

OOOH! I go for Pop Princess!:)

[hunnybee1992]

lol, i'm glad you like it ^.^
the other story - The Band - is one taht i'm writing with my friend ;p

[No1CoolGirl]

Ya,I go 4 Pop Princess! Good luck!;)

[kokoro_143]

i dont get it......but i chose the band.

[CrazyCutie129]

I prefer the pop princess story.

[HelloKitty09]

I still pick pop princess!!!!

[Ashma'Lee]

I like the band one.

[x-x-kira-x-x]

I like both, but i vote for pop princess.

[Forsaken]

Pop princess !!!

[Valerie]

I like both of them!!!

[inuyashakiss]

do the band!!!

[hunnybee1992]

lol, sorry it took me so long to reply
[i was on computer lockdown] ;p
i'll post the first chapter of Pop Princess soon
[since you guys seem to like that better]
but if you want...i can make another thread for The Band ^.^

[hunnybee1992]

(i don't mean to double post, but i finally have part of the first chapter done! i'll post it on here, and post the rest later. oh, and the stuff italicized [sp?] is her narrating [sp?] ;p)

Preface


"Kaitlynn! Kaitlynn!" There's one.
"Over here Kaitlynn!" So pointless.
"Kaitlynn! What's it like being one of the hottest supermodels?" There's so many of them.
"What's the new album like?"
"How's the movie coming?"
"I hear you worked with groups like Fall Out Boy and The Click Five!" It's like they don't stop. Like they have nothing better to do but ambush me.
"Is it true that you co-directed the soap 'Oh My Stars'?"
Shut up! Stop it! Go away! I'm done with all of this! I just wanna go home.
"Alright, I think that's enough damage for today." Thank you dad!
"Mr. Turner! Is it true that your daughter will be doing the American voice in a new anime series?" I thought he said that was enough.
"Thank you all for coming. Come on, let's go." Wait, this seems sorta familiar.
"Hi sweetie! Rough conference? Well, once we get to the car, we can go where ever you want! How does that sound?" It sounds good mom, but I feel like we should use the limo instead of...the...No! Wait! Not again!!
"I'll drive this time." No! Don't let him drive!
"Whatever. I don't really care." No! You can't let him!
You can't let him drive! Let's get a limo. I don't want it to happen. I don't want to get my picture taken again. No!!
"So, where exactly are we going sweetie?"

"STOP!"

Kaitlynn woke up with a start and looked around her. She was sitting on lime green bed sheets which were astray at the bottom of her purple canopy bed. All of her assorted blue lace pillows were thrown about her light red room.

She was home.

"Wow. That was some dream." she gasped. She shivered as sweat began to run down her spine.


Chapter One - The Idea
To her now, that was just some distant memory, coming back every night to haunt her. It was her personal nightmare - her reality that happened two months ago.
After a very harsh media conference about her skyrocketed career at the age of 17, Kaitlynn Turner was involved in a car accident. While her father Justin Turner was driving, a photographer got too close when he was taking a picture, distracting her father. Her mother Alyssa Turner srceamed when she noticed the light they were passing through was red, but she was too late. A driver coming from the left hit their car dead on, causing the deaths of Kaitlynn's parents. All she suffered was a mild concussion.

((i'll add the rest later ;p))

[xMuffinTopx]

The band
its cool

[hunnybee1992]

((here's some more of Chapter One xDD))

"Hey Kate? Are you okay? I heard you screaming from down the hall." asked a familiar voice. It was Ashlie, Kaitlynn's childhood friend. Kaitlynn had asked Ashlie to move in with her after that night. Ashlie was a foster child, so no one minded that she stayed here.
Still in her current daze, Kaitlynn responded.
"Yeah, I'm fine. Just had a little nightmare is all."
"The same one?" Ashlie asked.
"Yeah, sadly." sighed Kaitlynn.
"Do you want me to spend the rest of the night in here with you?" Ashlie asked. She was more concerned about how Kaitlynn would react later than if she would fall back asleep.
"If it'll make you feel better, then I don't mind if you do."
"Hey, don't blame me for being concerned! I just don't want you doing anything like the last time you had that nightmare." Ashlie said with a huff.


((will continue later))

[x_karinaa]

I prefer the Pop Princess- but I think that both stories will be great. :D

[hunnybee1992]

thanks ^^
i might make another forum for The Band...
but i'm not sure,
what with school starting and all ;p

[panda_10]

Pop princess!

[Kissu]

I like the whole mystery action going on in the Pop Princess opening, it's really nice. =D
But being me = I <3 mysteries, those kind of stuff. xD

The Band is nice too, but I just am drawn to PP more xD

[hunnybee1992]

[lol, thanks for your input guys!]

More of Chapter One:

Kaitlynn looked down at her once smooth arm. Now a bold scar disfigures it.
"Okay, sure. You can stay." sighed Kaitlynn.
"Yay! Like old times!" giggled Ashlie.
Kaitlynn couldn't help but laugh. "Yeah, like old times."
As Ashlie began to gather up all the scattered covers, Kaitlynn began to wonder about something that had been bothering her. A fluffy, pale pink pillow - full force to the face - brought her back to reality.
"Gotcha!" giggled Ashlie.
"You are so on!" laughed Kaitlynn, who grabbed a pillow and hit her back. This started one of their famous pillow fights.

[cutybuffy]

pop princess would be rad!!!! lol *^_^*

[hunnybee1992]

[lol, that's the one that i started...i have most of the first chapter posted on here....but i have to finish the rest of it...i'm having temporary writers block ><]

[Adi]

!!The Band!!
x3
lol