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Ashma'Lee
08-08-2008, 05:07 PM
Ok, this is my latests story. And I'm going to finish this one.(I can never finish a story)


Preface

I never thought anything like this would ever happen to me. But now looking at my death, I guess anything can happen ocen you leave home and open youself to opretunites.

But now thinking about it all I wonder, is it worth it?


Chapter 1

"Why wont you join the cheerleding team?" Sophia asked as she walked into the downtown of her little Island town.
"Cuz' I'm joining the Drama Team." Mysteria told her looking at her cells battery.
"Still it would be fun!" Sophia told her as she walked into her favirote store.
"Well I'm almost out of battery."
"Fine see ya!" Sophia said as she looked at the hats.
"What to buy today." she thought looking.
Sophi was differnt and so where her friends. She was an elf. She lookedlike her dad untill her ear's, and she is short and skinny.Her mother's side is all elf.
And her friend RosaLynn is a Neko. She has Ornge fur with black triangls around her face, arm, legs, and tail. Her and Sophia are the only one allowed in her school to wear hat's. Then her other friend, Mysteria is a Fariy. She has the hardest time in school cuz of her wing's. She get's teased a lot but they stick up for her. And she is a lot shorter then every one else. She is about 4'1.
But we just moved to this island. Hopefully we get treated better.
After about an hour of shopping I decited to go home. On the way back I bumped into RosaLynn.
"Hey! What are you doing?"RosLynn asked looking at my bag.
"Oh just got done shopping, I'm going home now."I told her.
"Hey, do you think I could come over?"
"Umm,Sure!" I said and then checked for my key.
"My key is missing." Sophia complaind patting her pocket's.
"Check your back pocket." RosaLynn old me and it was there.

That's all I have for now. I will post more later.

lyndasis
08-08-2008, 05:28 PM
interesting...mythical or half mythical creatures schooling with humans?

Ashma'Lee
08-08-2008, 05:37 PM
Yep, I like fantacy, and the first chapter not done yet.

hunnybee1992
08-08-2008, 05:43 PM
I like it ^^
it's cute, and i love the names ^^
is that how you came up with the idea for your RP?
it's good ^.^

Ashma'Lee
08-08-2008, 05:46 PM
Yea, that's how I came up with my Rp. And Thanks!

hunnybee1992
08-08-2008, 06:08 PM
That's a cool idea!
i might do that for my next RP, if i ever come up with another good idea xP

x-x-kira-x-x
08-08-2008, 06:09 PM
I also think the names are great. =)

Ashma'Lee
08-08-2008, 06:52 PM
Thank's My sisture helped me, but I need a name for the Island.

hunnybee1992
08-08-2008, 07:11 PM
A name for the island?
hmm....
well...i guess you can name it after you like
like Hibiscus Island, or Cherrywood Island...
something unique like that ^.^

Ashma'Lee
08-08-2008, 07:15 PM
Here i'll make an outline of the Island so you can think of something for it.

hunnybee1992
08-08-2008, 07:19 PM
okay, cool ^.^

Royal Rose
08-08-2008, 07:27 PM
I'm going to write one! Later....

Ashma'Lee
08-09-2008, 10:00 PM
Well Sorry I wasn't on like all day, I was up late last night writeing letter's to my Aunt, Grandma, and Grandpa. So I got to finish up the first chapter tonight and post it tomorrow...

Royal Rose
08-09-2008, 10:04 PM
Have you done the Island Name yet?
How about this one if you haven't: Nenderland

Ashma'Lee
08-09-2008, 10:15 PM
Hmmm, that might work....

hunnybee1992
08-10-2008, 01:01 AM
I like that name ^^
and a good title...
hmm...
how about...
The Misadventures of Nenderland
^.^
...although that sounds kind of lame ;p

Ashma'Lee
08-10-2008, 06:26 PM
Here is the rest of Chapter 1.

After I had meet RosaLynn I loved her like my sisture. Her family and my family are a lot alike, that's not alway's the best thing in our case.
My family got into fight's a lot. And I came home on day from school and my things where in boxs in my brother's car. Jason-my big brother- was fed up with the way we where liveing and he didn't want me there when something bad happend. So we moved to this little island, and we have lived he happily.
But RosaLynn was born here and was born as a Neko, when she was born, her parent where devastated they yell alot, so she stay's here alot. Jason has told her verytime she stay's that shecan live with us cuz we know what's going on when she comes over crying.
"So, do you want anything?" I asked opening the fridge.
"Watcha' got?"
"Just about nothing!" I told her with a gigle.
"How bout some chips?"
"Order up!"I said giveing her a bowl of chip's.
"Thankies!"
After a few minutes the door opend.
"Hey little sis!"Jason said giveing me a hug.
"HEy, Lynn! How's it going at the place?" Jason asked takeing some milk from tthe fridge.
"Oh, the normalness, plates flying, yelling, crying, and the ocasenal screaming." Rosalynn said with a a cucckel.
"Like I said before, you can come and stay with us!"Jason told her for about the 20th time now.
"You know what, I think I'll take your offer this time."
"Sweet! Here I'll go put the spare bed in Sophies room." Jason said finishing his milk the going to the spare room.
"Do you want to go with?" RosaLynn asked with a sigh.
"Sure." I said was we walk out the door. Once in front of her house I could her the crashing of plates.
"Come on let's go." she sighed.
Once we where inside it was like myold house all over again.
"Let's go quickly." she said and grabed my had and pulled me to her room.
"Kay, I have my clothes in a box here with some book's and my shoes. And the rest of my thing's are right here." she said takeing to boxes out from under her bed.
"Kay. I'll take this on." I said takeing one of them and opening the door. She walked and we left her parents behind never to see them again.

Kay. That's Chapter 1. Chapter will be posted tomorrow the whole thing. (I think)
And here is the Island.(It's very un-detailed.)And the girl's are Sophia, RosaLynn, and Mysteria.

hunnybee1992
08-18-2008, 02:45 PM
i like it ^^
it's cute! <3
and i love the pictures for the characters =3

Ashma'Lee
08-18-2008, 05:03 PM
Kay, so sorry it's taken so long, but we have been getting ready for school, going to church activites, and other thing's like that. So here is Chapter 2.

Chapter 2

Once back on my little island away from the main Island, we walked up to my place and acar was in the frount, and not one I know.
"Come on, let's go see who that is." i said walking up to the door and un-locking it.
"Where back." I said when we walked in, I saw some one on the chouch with Jason, and he didn't look very happy.
"Who is this, Jason?" they asked and I knew who she was in an instent.
"Well, I guess that dosn't suprize me that you don't know your own daughter." Jason said getting up and helping RosaLynn was her box.
"What!Why is she here?" I said looking at my mother.
"Well I came to tell your brother something inportent. And I would like a better welcome from both of you, it took a long time to find both of you." she said standing up.
"Well we came here so you wouldn't find us." Jason told her and opend the door for her. She just looked at him with a look I rember.
"Why don't you and your friend go to your room." she said looking at me.
"No you ani't going to touch him!" I told her.
"Don't talk to me like that, did Inot teach you any thing!?" she yelled grabing my arm.
"Let me go!" I yelled wrenching my arm away. She just looked at me and then smacked me.
"Stop!" Jason said pulling her away from me.
"What did I say about grabing people?" she said turning to him.
"Well, we are well informed now, can we plaes get back to our happy lives?" he said takeing her to the door.
"Well, I hope you come visit him soon." she said then left.
"What did she tell you?" I asked picking up the box I droped.
"Well her husbned has left her." he said and grabing the otherand we walking to my room with RosaLynn.
"That was your, mother?" she asked quietly.
"Yea,we never liked her. She has alway's been abuseive. That's when we moved here, when it hurt me to give some one a hug."
"Is this everything?" Jason asked setting the box on her bed.
"Yep. That's it." RosaLynn said starting to take thing out.
"Here you go."I said setting the other box on her bed.
"Thank's." she said and put her clothes on her bed and set her notebook's on the floor.
"Here we can put them in here." I said giveing her a fuzzy tote that fit under her bed.
"Thanks." she said putting her notebooks in it.
"You can put your clothes in the closet." I said helping her put them on hangers and folding them. When she was un-packed, and we where coming in to the kitchen for supper, when we heard a knock on the door.
"I'll get it." I said and when it get the door. They knocked again like they where in a hurry. I hurred to the door and opend it slowly. I wa very scard when I saw who it was.

Okay, there is Chapter 2. And here is Jason, Sophia's Mother.

hunnybee1992
08-18-2008, 05:17 PM
oh!
i wanna know who was at the door!
>.<
lol =3

SweetBlood
08-18-2008, 05:56 PM
It's Cute!

Ashma'Lee
08-18-2008, 07:07 PM
Thanks! And I am going to be slow on Chapter 3. I g to school tomorrow and then home work and everything else.

hunnybee1992
08-18-2008, 07:11 PM
eww...that doesn't sound like any fun >.<

Ashma'Lee
08-18-2008, 07:27 PM
The homework, no, but starting school, yay!

hunnybee1992
08-18-2008, 07:29 PM
i can agree with you there ^>^
i hate teh homework...
but i enjoy getting to see all my friends again =3

Ashma'Lee
08-18-2008, 08:33 PM
Well I hung out with my friend almost all summer but still a berry boring summer.

hunnybee1992
08-18-2008, 09:04 PM
lol, same here ><
not much to report...
jus stuff i would normally do during school ;p

Ashma'Lee
08-20-2008, 11:06 PM
Ok, I have only started to write this down, so I am at the libray so you only get a little bit.

Chapter 3

"Jason! I think it's for you!" Sophia said backing away for the door. She would never forget him. Tall and bulkywith an evil look about him all the time, like he has done murder or somthing.
"Kay! Who is it......" he trailed off once he saw who it was.
"Son, I need to speak with you. Now!" my old father, said in a rude voice.
"Okay, let's go outside," JAson said looking back at me and RosaLynn,"Supper is on the burner sture it in a few seconds. I'll be back soon." he said the steped out side with my father.
"This is scary. He is soooo evil!" I said walking to the stove.
"WHo was it?" RosaLynn asked she had been so quite I forgot she was here.
"Oh, that's my over-abusve father. I don't even know why Jason went out" then I heard Jason yell at my father to leave, then a smack.
"Not Good!" I said then dived outside. I saw Jason walking back to the house, and what was my father on the ground.
"Go inside." Jason said and opend his phone and dialed a number and asked them to come and pick us up.

lyndasis
08-21-2008, 12:10 AM
lol i thought jason was the one hit
i laughed when i saw it was the evil father:p
more please!

hunnybee1992
08-21-2008, 03:53 PM
that was cool!
i agree with lyndasis, i thought it was the father that was hit xP

HoneyAngel
08-21-2008, 08:09 PM
Wow, you haven't even finished Chapter 1 yet? Laughs and falls off her chair :)

Roxy_Berry
08-21-2008, 08:14 PM
HoneyAngel, Ashma'Lee had posted chapter 3 on the previous page so chapter 1 would probably be finished by now.

Chapter 3
"Jason! I think it's for you!" Sophia said backing away for the door. She would never forget him. Tall and bulkywith an evil look about him all the time, like he has done murder or somthing.
"Kay! Who is it......" he trailed off once he saw who it was.
"Son, I need to speak with you. Now!" my old father, said in a rude voice.
"Okay, let's go outside," JAson said looking back at me and RosaLynn,"Supper is on the burner sture it in a few seconds. I'll be back soon." he said the steped out side with my father.
"This is scary. He is soooo evil!" I said walking to the stove.
"WHo was it?" RosaLynn asked she had been so quite I forgot she was here.
"Oh, that's my over-abusve father. I don't even know why Jason went out" then I heard Jason yell at my father to leave, then a smack.
"Not Good!" I said then dived outside. I saw Jason walking back to the house, and what was my father on the ground.
"Go inside." Jason said and opend his phone and dialed a number and asked them to come and pick us up.

HoneyAngel
08-21-2008, 08:18 PM
Oh..............
hahahahhahahhahah!
Silly me :)

hunnybee1992
08-22-2008, 02:21 AM
it's all good,
it happens to the best of us xD