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Bluewaters11
07-25-2008, 03:36 PM
Death Roses

A rose goes out to anybody,
who is almost there.
They will get a Rose, looks bloody.
They will take it, and go elsewhere.
It is time to give them a death rose.
It looks beautiful,
Take a whiff, and it burns your nose.
You better be careful.
Why?
Because, your next.

camillerox
07-25-2008, 03:46 PM
Nice, wanna hear one of mine?
Ok, here goes,... (Watch out! It might be explosive!)

Roses in the field,
Thorns on stems they weild,
Looks so pretty in your head,
In real life, bloody red.

Did you like it?

Bluewaters11
07-25-2008, 07:37 PM
Dead inside

I feel dead.
like noone cares.
What am i,
But a simple girl?
I am Dead
on the inside.
Tears are down my cheeks.
yet no one is sorry.
Death is upon me
In the inside
In the Heart.
I need a Death Rose

Cherry Fairy
07-25-2008, 08:29 PM
Please do not double post Bluewaters11.
I have had to say that many times.

You have double posted twice in one thread.

Sorry for the spam.

Bluewaters11
07-25-2008, 08:31 PM
Why are you not talking 2 me and how come i cantpm u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!@

lyndasis
07-26-2008, 03:32 PM
oo rose poems nice
heres mine.... :D its long


Rotten Roses in the crimson puddle

Sitting in a bed of rotten roses
The thorns prick and scar
As she dreams of the land afar
There her heart dances.
But then reality steals aback her senses
At her reflection motionlessly she stares
Her blood a deep crimson puddle
In her hands a fiddle
She plays it till her hands bleed
Her heart aches with need
She patiently awaits the day
It promises freedom from the dark shadow
When the unsung song
the song of her fiddle cant be heard nomore.