Friendship poem

[Perfect_Ten]

Read this poem and tell me what you think:

Sometimes when I’m happy,
Which is pretty rare these days,
My happiness chases the shadows,
But to some delay.

For some unknown reason,
It takes a while to smile,
Maybe its the deaths,
The agony and denial.

But sometimes when I forget,
Which is hardly ever,
The pain is chased away,
By friends who will stay forever.

[HelloKitty09]

That was cool! Nice writing skills.

[hunnybee1992]

i like it ^^