missrandom
07-20-2008, 06:08 PM
Hey ppl
sooooooooo
Yeah, i write songs like all the time some of y friends like them, but i need some more views. Heres 2 of them
Fool in the Rain:
Hey, I wanna play in the rain to-o-o.
Status: wet
Feeling: cold
Want to: go outside
Pull off your jacket
Take off your boots
Today’s the day to do whatever you want to
Without feeling bad
Without feeling sad
Don’t listen to anyone who tells you not to
And scream to the world
Chorus
I’m the girl in the rain with no umbrella
I’m the one who twirls like an idiot
And Ill dance and Ill splash
And I don’t want to know what you’re saying
Cause I’m a fool in the rain
And I don’t care what you think of me
Don’t you think
That someday
Robots will take over the earth
And tell you what to do
Does it not matter to you
Don’t listen to anyone who tells you what to do
And shout to the world
Chorus
Now the sun is setting
But the day has just begun
You can go to bed and dream
About anything and anyone
You could dream about the rain
And a strange person holding no umbrella
And then remember
That person is you
I’m the girl in the rain with no umbrella
I’m the one who twirls like an idiot
And Ill dance and Ill splash
And I don’t want to know what you’re saying
Cause I’m a fool in the rain
And I don’t care what you think of me-e-e
Status: losing power
Feeling: rusty
Want to: go outside with nooooo
_______________________________________________
Gone:
Let me close my eyes
Let me see you again,
Missing you already
When you’re still here
So what am I meant to do?
Without you
C:
And now I have no idea
Whether I’m up or down
Just out of my reach
Leaving me here to weep,
Need my heart back,
Need my life back,
Need you back again
But you’re already gone
You’re already gone
And now the sunny days
Have ended
No more smiles being passed around
You knew just how to cheer me up
And now I cant hear that sound
C
No more sun
No more smiles
No more you
No more laughter
No more crying
No more you
You’ve blocked out my life
Now you’re gone
What am I meant to do?
Without you
C
Cause your gone gone gone gone
Gone gone gone gone
Gone gone gone gone gone
And I’m missing you
Now you’re gone
Please post comments,
Thank u
sooooooooo
Yeah, i write songs like all the time some of y friends like them, but i need some more views. Heres 2 of them
Fool in the Rain:
Hey, I wanna play in the rain to-o-o.
Status: wet
Feeling: cold
Want to: go outside
Pull off your jacket
Take off your boots
Today’s the day to do whatever you want to
Without feeling bad
Without feeling sad
Don’t listen to anyone who tells you not to
And scream to the world
Chorus
I’m the girl in the rain with no umbrella
I’m the one who twirls like an idiot
And Ill dance and Ill splash
And I don’t want to know what you’re saying
Cause I’m a fool in the rain
And I don’t care what you think of me
Don’t you think
That someday
Robots will take over the earth
And tell you what to do
Does it not matter to you
Don’t listen to anyone who tells you what to do
And shout to the world
Chorus
Now the sun is setting
But the day has just begun
You can go to bed and dream
About anything and anyone
You could dream about the rain
And a strange person holding no umbrella
And then remember
That person is you
I’m the girl in the rain with no umbrella
I’m the one who twirls like an idiot
And Ill dance and Ill splash
And I don’t want to know what you’re saying
Cause I’m a fool in the rain
And I don’t care what you think of me-e-e
Status: losing power
Feeling: rusty
Want to: go outside with nooooo
_______________________________________________
Gone:
Let me close my eyes
Let me see you again,
Missing you already
When you’re still here
So what am I meant to do?
Without you
C:
And now I have no idea
Whether I’m up or down
Just out of my reach
Leaving me here to weep,
Need my heart back,
Need my life back,
Need you back again
But you’re already gone
You’re already gone
And now the sunny days
Have ended
No more smiles being passed around
You knew just how to cheer me up
And now I cant hear that sound
C
No more sun
No more smiles
No more you
No more laughter
No more crying
No more you
You’ve blocked out my life
Now you’re gone
What am I meant to do?
Without you
C
Cause your gone gone gone gone
Gone gone gone gone
Gone gone gone gone gone
And I’m missing you
Now you’re gone
Please post comments,
Thank u