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xXxEvexXx
07-15-2008, 06:50 PM
(This thread is actually just about some of my book previews that I wrote. I'm starting with my other book, The Dead Walking Stick)

I Looked upon the boy, he was different than i imagined. His tall figure surprises me as he would look like a giant in one of those fairy tale stories. He was very pale as the blank color,so he doesn't go out the often. He looked very skinny as if he didn't eat anything.

He was so different than anyone i've ever met. In fact, he was so different.......he has no friends. They would call him names like "the Stick" or the "The Walking Stick". He would try to fit in......but no one would accept him.

But we were alike........Maybe I could help.............being his friend.....


(Well, that was the stortest preview i've ever written.....this story is most likely a friendship story though. I'll post some more previews soon.. >w<)

Kissu
07-15-2008, 07:16 PM
impressive owo'

xXxEvexXx
07-18-2008, 09:54 PM
(thankies! >w<......Now for my other preview that came from my horror story about a murderous child and her "group"..scary..)

My house and my new husband. A Perfect combo for my life. Even though my husband got a divorce with his other wife, i've tired to comfort him with all of my heart. I went to the kitchen to get the bowl of popcorn. My husband and I planned to see a scary movie,tonight. I walked out of the kitchen and sat down next to my husband.

He smiled at me and I smiled back. The scary didn't go on just yet. I put the bowl of popcorn on the table in front of me. Though a breaking news came on. My husband and I were shocked.......Another murder commited. From the past weeks, tons of murders were commited each hour. Though when the cameras got a closer look,a sign was revealed. I couldn't tell what the sign was. Then,the image was now burned into my mind. Then, we heard a knock on the door. "i'll get it". As I went to the door, a caution came on to watch for the murderer that commited these crimes. I went and opened the door. What i saw,made me surprised........a young 5 year old child standing....in front of the door, holding stuffed doll.

"can i help you?".
"Is mother home?".
"mother?"

What was this girl thinking, coming in the front door asking for her mother when it was past bedtime for the children. Well,maybe its a lost orphan or a child finding its mother.

(sorry but i'm going to stop here....though i might write a small tale of what would happen if the child went to another house.....>w<)

Ashlie
07-18-2008, 09:54 PM
^^
Wow.
Fantabulous.

missrandom
07-20-2008, 06:04 PM
the second one remindes me of doctor who
and its also 1 of oyour rpg characters lol
so which one was written foirst
lol