evol
07-10-2008, 03:50 PM
Okay people, vote on your favourite story out of these two who tied.
If you vote for the wrong one I will personally -
ANYWAY! The voting will end in two weeks.
(I'll have to leave on the 23rd so the person who goes out please don't enter your story for the next one, everyone else who ENTERED (other entries won't be accepted) please post your story in the original writing contest thread!)
By Mewmewmelody
The Opened Heart Finale
Michelle Looked at The Gleaming Moon of the Night escaping from the Enthusiastic crowd in the City where her Beloved Jason was.The poor Loving soul was Alone in the woods holding her Black Umbrella while sitting on a Stump in front of the Moonlight.She took out her Moon Locket and opened it,she took out the small golden Crescent and held it to the Moon.It Gleamed so Brightly that the Whole forest was shining.Around the Town Center,Jason looked ahead of the Gleaming Forest and ran towards it.He looked around for Michelle and he Saw her holding the Cresent and singing a Soft Melody.He hid behind a Tree and just looked at what was happening.Michelle's Crescent stopped glowing as she finished her soft Melody.She held the Crescent next to her Beating heart.Jason came out from hiding behind the Tree.Just now,Michelle looked around to see if anyone was around and just when turned to the next Tree,she spotted Jason.Jason looked away blushing.Michelle gave a Faintly smile on her Weak pale face."so,you came back for me."said Michelle quietly."yes i did,i couldn't stand to leave my friend behind."you consider me as a Friend?"asked Michelle softly."yes i do."said Jason as he walked a bit further to Michelle.Michelle shyly Blushed." i would also consider you as a Friend as well."said Michelle as she got up and walked over to Jason.Then she hugged him."you're the only friend that would understand me for who i am."whispered Michelle.Jason sighed and returned the Hug."Are you sure that you would stay in the world of the living?"asked Jason." I think not."said Michelle."why?"asked Jason."The Spell will curse me for too long,If I Stay,then i might disappear forever and never come back."cried Michelle softly."but won't you come back?"asked Jason again." I Might,if we find the cure.Then I Will return to live as a Living person and not a Soul."said Michelle."well,thats good news because i Never want to leave you behind."said Jason hugging her More tightly."I'll never leave you behind,I'll stay with you for the Rest of my life."said Michelle as tears of joy came out."um...Michelle can i tell you one thing?"asked Jason."sure,anything."said Michelle."I wanted to say this but,i'm afraid that you won't like me so i'll tell you this,I Love You,Michelle Warden."said Jason as he Broke the hug.Michelle stood there,Her dream came true."I'm sorry if i said it,but still i don't want to break our Friendship apart."said Jason as she looked down ashamed."But Jason,I love you too."said Michelle.Jason head lifted up and they both hugged for the last time till Michelle Had to Leave.The Couple Hugged in the Moonlight and as the Souls returned flying away.Michelle lets go of Jason and kissed him on the Cheek."I'll come back one day,to fufill my Eternal Love,and My Marriage."said Michelle as she gave one last look to Jason.She took out her Golden Crescent and held it next to her heart.She disappeared in front of Jason's eyes.He looked around Michelle wasn't there.All he saw was Michelle's Golden Crescent.Jason looked up to the Moon."she'll come back......she'll come back."said Jason as he held the Golden Crescent next to his heart.A Memory pictured in his Mind where they first met,in the Spot where they were.He still looked at the Moon and pictured Michelle's Beautiful face in the Moon.
By Evol
The dim moonlight was talking to me - 'You shouldn't have run away, I told you so, you shouldn't have run away'. Tears fluttered on my cheeks with the speed of the wind. The air smelt of fear and lies, all mixed in with teh beautiful scenery of a winters night. My trainers cracked against the spindly twigs as my knees gave way and the earth slapped my front, my face. Blood splurted from my nose like a fountain and I lay there, still, crying. My eyes fixed their gaze on a foot infront of me, creeping their way upwards. His hairy legs came into view, then his shorts, then a t-shirt and leather jacket, strong arms with various tatoos. I flinched when I saw his face, his handsome good-looks would fool anyone. But not me.
My eyes slipped out of focus as a bullet cut into my back.
There was a bright light infront of me, blaring into view. Heaven? Was I dead? I couldn't feel any pain. The light suddenly had something round it - a lampshade. Then a table came into view, with flowers, lots of flowers. My favourite dog teddy was sitting next to me on the pillow, his nose snuffled into my hair.
Faces then appeared infront of me, a masked man saying something to a small girl with golden curls and a warm, rosy-cheeked face. Elouisa looked at me and squealed with joy.
"Cheryl! Cheryl! CHERYL! You're okay!" she squealed with delight and excitement. I smiled, which caused me pain and my face curled into an ugly grimace.
I tried to sit up, but the doctor pushed me back onto my pillow, softly but firmly. I tried to swing my legs over the side of the bed but I suddenly couldn't feel them any more, and I couldn't move them either.
What had happeded to me? I tried to bend my left leg, wiggle my toes, kick out with my foot, but nothing happened. I reached out to touch them with my hand, and they were still there. They felt normal, but why weren't they? I screamed, and nurses came running, along with my family.
"WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS?!?!" I roared at people, still screaming.
My mum stroked my hair and tweaked my ear, and I stopped screaming, because she hadn't done that in years. I felt light and carefree, but I was still here, in Manchester Park hospital, sobbing and asking people why my legs weren't functioning.
"Don't tell her," the doctor whispered, but not quiet enough.
"DON'T TELL ME WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS! I WANT TO GO HOME! HELP! WHAT HAPPENED TO TONY?! DOD HE DO THIS? I WANT TO MOVE MY LEGS!" I sobbed, screaming my head off. The small girl in the bed next to me was looking at me, as was the boy opposite me.
"You've been paralysed, sweetie. It's Tony's fault," mum whispered, stroking my hair.
My world fell apart.
If you vote for the wrong one I will personally -
ANYWAY! The voting will end in two weeks.
(I'll have to leave on the 23rd so the person who goes out please don't enter your story for the next one, everyone else who ENTERED (other entries won't be accepted) please post your story in the original writing contest thread!)
By Mewmewmelody
The Opened Heart Finale
Michelle Looked at The Gleaming Moon of the Night escaping from the Enthusiastic crowd in the City where her Beloved Jason was.The poor Loving soul was Alone in the woods holding her Black Umbrella while sitting on a Stump in front of the Moonlight.She took out her Moon Locket and opened it,she took out the small golden Crescent and held it to the Moon.It Gleamed so Brightly that the Whole forest was shining.Around the Town Center,Jason looked ahead of the Gleaming Forest and ran towards it.He looked around for Michelle and he Saw her holding the Cresent and singing a Soft Melody.He hid behind a Tree and just looked at what was happening.Michelle's Crescent stopped glowing as she finished her soft Melody.She held the Crescent next to her Beating heart.Jason came out from hiding behind the Tree.Just now,Michelle looked around to see if anyone was around and just when turned to the next Tree,she spotted Jason.Jason looked away blushing.Michelle gave a Faintly smile on her Weak pale face."so,you came back for me."said Michelle quietly."yes i did,i couldn't stand to leave my friend behind."you consider me as a Friend?"asked Michelle softly."yes i do."said Jason as he walked a bit further to Michelle.Michelle shyly Blushed." i would also consider you as a Friend as well."said Michelle as she got up and walked over to Jason.Then she hugged him."you're the only friend that would understand me for who i am."whispered Michelle.Jason sighed and returned the Hug."Are you sure that you would stay in the world of the living?"asked Jason." I think not."said Michelle."why?"asked Jason."The Spell will curse me for too long,If I Stay,then i might disappear forever and never come back."cried Michelle softly."but won't you come back?"asked Jason again." I Might,if we find the cure.Then I Will return to live as a Living person and not a Soul."said Michelle."well,thats good news because i Never want to leave you behind."said Jason hugging her More tightly."I'll never leave you behind,I'll stay with you for the Rest of my life."said Michelle as tears of joy came out."um...Michelle can i tell you one thing?"asked Jason."sure,anything."said Michelle."I wanted to say this but,i'm afraid that you won't like me so i'll tell you this,I Love You,Michelle Warden."said Jason as he Broke the hug.Michelle stood there,Her dream came true."I'm sorry if i said it,but still i don't want to break our Friendship apart."said Jason as she looked down ashamed."But Jason,I love you too."said Michelle.Jason head lifted up and they both hugged for the last time till Michelle Had to Leave.The Couple Hugged in the Moonlight and as the Souls returned flying away.Michelle lets go of Jason and kissed him on the Cheek."I'll come back one day,to fufill my Eternal Love,and My Marriage."said Michelle as she gave one last look to Jason.She took out her Golden Crescent and held it next to her heart.She disappeared in front of Jason's eyes.He looked around Michelle wasn't there.All he saw was Michelle's Golden Crescent.Jason looked up to the Moon."she'll come back......she'll come back."said Jason as he held the Golden Crescent next to his heart.A Memory pictured in his Mind where they first met,in the Spot where they were.He still looked at the Moon and pictured Michelle's Beautiful face in the Moon.
By Evol
The dim moonlight was talking to me - 'You shouldn't have run away, I told you so, you shouldn't have run away'. Tears fluttered on my cheeks with the speed of the wind. The air smelt of fear and lies, all mixed in with teh beautiful scenery of a winters night. My trainers cracked against the spindly twigs as my knees gave way and the earth slapped my front, my face. Blood splurted from my nose like a fountain and I lay there, still, crying. My eyes fixed their gaze on a foot infront of me, creeping their way upwards. His hairy legs came into view, then his shorts, then a t-shirt and leather jacket, strong arms with various tatoos. I flinched when I saw his face, his handsome good-looks would fool anyone. But not me.
My eyes slipped out of focus as a bullet cut into my back.
There was a bright light infront of me, blaring into view. Heaven? Was I dead? I couldn't feel any pain. The light suddenly had something round it - a lampshade. Then a table came into view, with flowers, lots of flowers. My favourite dog teddy was sitting next to me on the pillow, his nose snuffled into my hair.
Faces then appeared infront of me, a masked man saying something to a small girl with golden curls and a warm, rosy-cheeked face. Elouisa looked at me and squealed with joy.
"Cheryl! Cheryl! CHERYL! You're okay!" she squealed with delight and excitement. I smiled, which caused me pain and my face curled into an ugly grimace.
I tried to sit up, but the doctor pushed me back onto my pillow, softly but firmly. I tried to swing my legs over the side of the bed but I suddenly couldn't feel them any more, and I couldn't move them either.
What had happeded to me? I tried to bend my left leg, wiggle my toes, kick out with my foot, but nothing happened. I reached out to touch them with my hand, and they were still there. They felt normal, but why weren't they? I screamed, and nurses came running, along with my family.
"WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS?!?!" I roared at people, still screaming.
My mum stroked my hair and tweaked my ear, and I stopped screaming, because she hadn't done that in years. I felt light and carefree, but I was still here, in Manchester Park hospital, sobbing and asking people why my legs weren't functioning.
"Don't tell her," the doctor whispered, but not quiet enough.
"DON'T TELL ME WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS! I WANT TO GO HOME! HELP! WHAT HAPPENED TO TONY?! DOD HE DO THIS? I WANT TO MOVE MY LEGS!" I sobbed, screaming my head off. The small girl in the bed next to me was looking at me, as was the boy opposite me.
"You've been paralysed, sweetie. It's Tony's fault," mum whispered, stroking my hair.
My world fell apart.