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Star_Spark
07-05-2008, 09:46 PM
The Little Mermaid was originally written by Hans-Christian Andersen and quite a bit of the original story actually made it into the popular movie correctly. Of course Mr. Andersen did not include any singing crabs or obnoxiously dumb sea gulls, but the actual plot lines, up to a point, are very similar.
In the original story, there is a sea king on the floor of the ocean. He has five beautiful daughters, the youngest of which is a fabulous singer. She is not named Ariel, in the story, but probably wishes she were. Her original name is Sirenetta.
Sirenetta is dying to get to the surface of the ocean so she can check out the sun and see the humans, but her parents (including her mother who is absent from the movie) forbid it until she is fifteen. Sirenetta is impatient, but obeys her parents. We should learn a lesson here, I think.
Freedom!


Finally, on her fifteenth birthday, Sirenetta’s father gives her a carved hair pin and instructions. He explains that mermaids and mermen do not have souls like humans do, so only bad things can come from contact with them. With some of the humans I know, I can see where this would be good advice.
Sirenetta finally makes her great escape and swims to the surface so quickly her fish friends can’t keep up. When she gets there, she finds a rock, relaxes and enjoys the sun. Lo and behold a ship comes by shooting off fireworks for the captain’s 20th birthday. Just like in the movie, a sudden storm comes up and sinks the ship.
The handsome captain is on the verge of drowning when Sirenetta, who’d been watching him the whole time, catches him and drags him to shore. Here is where the story starts to go off track.


Lost Love
Sirenetta hears other humans approaching, so she goes back into the water while the prince is still unconscious. Three other humans find him and when he opens his eyes he sees the youngest of them – a beautiful girl. He’s instantly in love.
Sirenetta goes home and sobs in her room for days the way any good fifteen-year-old should, and then goes to the Witch of the Deeps to ask for help. The witch is willing to help Sirenetta in exchange for her voice (just like in the movie), and gives her a potion.


The Witch does warn the young mermaid that taking the potion will give her legs, but will hurt excruciatingly. Then, every step she takes after that will be unbearably painful. Apparently love is blind and not very smart, because Sirenetta takes the potion anyway.
Once she is human, she can never again become a mermaid. She will simply dissolve like sea foam if she tries to return to the ocean.
The captain, who is also a prince, finds her on the beach and feels sorry for her. He takes her to the castle and becomes her friend. He is still in love with the other young woman, but she had returned to her home. Sirenetta is in agony with every step she takes and her heart is still broken because she knows he doesn’t love her.


A Happy Ending?
Then, one day the young woman the prince loves comes back. It turns out she loves the prince, too and agrees to a wedding. Sirenetta, the prince’s friend, goes along on the ship during and after the wedding. She is so miserable that she’s planning to jump back to the sea and dissolve.

Suddenly her sisters appear and offer her a magic knife. They’ve traded their hair to the Witch of the Deeps for it, and if Sirenetta kills the prince with the knife she can return to the ocean, and everything will be like it was.
Sirenetta goes to the prince’s room, but looking at his beautiful face makes her realize she can’t kill him. She goes back to the deck of the ship and throws the knife into the water. Then she gets ready to jump in herself.

Suddenly Sirenetta is drawn into the air and hears voices. She is suddenly able to speak again, and asks the voices what is happening. She learns that by doing good deeds to humans, she has been rescued from her soulless death and taken into the sky by the fairies of the air. Now she can help humans for the rest of eternity.
I don’t know about you, but I like the movie ending a bit better. The guy gets the girl, the girl gets the guy, the Witch gets punished and they all live happily ever after (except the Witch, of course.) But as we know, most original fairy tales didn’t have a happy ending – at least according to our more modern definition. I guess becoming a fairy of the sky is the best a mermaid without a soul (or tail) can hope for.

Daenerys
07-06-2008, 07:06 PM
Where did you copy this from, Star? :)

Star_Spark
07-06-2008, 07:46 PM
The Doll Palace.
I thought I would bring it to PixelBee, that's all.

Daenerys
07-06-2008, 07:52 PM
It's nice. And it's handy i you ant to write a short paper or project about fairytales. Did someone at the Doll Palce write it? You see, if I wanted to use this, I'd need to know who wrote it. And I like it.

Star_Spark
07-06-2008, 07:55 PM
I have written a lot of stories in my whole life. I typed 2 into in to PixelBee, Dying Patricia and Vaddel Giants

Lady Amanda
07-09-2008, 01:33 AM
i love to write but i am deathly afraid of rejection, so i dont write then o anything, i think about them thats all.

Lydia
07-09-2008, 06:08 AM
That's such a beautiful tragic story. Very similar to the story I learned as a child. Fairy tales weren't the happy-ending Disneyesque stories they are nowadays.. I used to wonder why all the fairy tale stories we were told were so horrific! Always children being mistreated and other such tragedies...Grimm's tales were quite grim! Hans Christian Anderson wrote The Little Mermaid I believe ... and he also wrote my other old favorite tearjerker-The Little Match Girl- Do kids still know this story these days? Let's see if I can remember it...This poor girl was dressed pretty much in rags- no coat- she was outside downtown in the snow begging for money or food. She had a few stick matches. You see, this was like over 100 years ago. There weren't lighters... This was her job every day rain or shine to sell matches to feed her family. She was told to sell them to make some money to bring home- and NOT to return until she gets money. I think it was Christmas- and she was starving too. It was getting later and later- People were just rushing past her, not even bothering to stop and notice if she was alright. She'd look in people's windows and see them with their families who loved them- all warm with the fireplace going, loads of food heaped on the dining tables... she'd daydream about being invited in, being fed by nice people... She was so cold and it was so late, she decided to light just one match. Her fingers were so cold and frozen they hurt her terribly. When she lit it, it was like instant joy- for a minute- she warmed her fingers, barely. and imagine how nice it must be for the people in their warm homes- eating that wonderful food...Then the match died.. She knew she didn't dare go home until she sold some matches...This goes on and on.....The longer she's out there the colder she gets and lights a match occasionally because she's just too cold...It's SO sad because by morning she's found frozen to death just sitting huddled up in someones doorway - out there on Christmas Day, the Poor Little Match Girl. There's a chance I'm leaving something out- Its been many many years since I read the story...but I think that's pretty much it... Well, there goes my second post! Sad one! I'll have to make the others happier!

WaldoIsFab(:
07-09-2008, 09:09 AM
Wow, that's a pretty amazing piece of literature.
Its so hard to choose which one I like better >_<, the movie or this. :P

=LovelyGalz=
07-09-2008, 09:14 AM
Wow that's amazing.

!Bloom!
07-09-2008, 10:36 AM
That's such a beautiful tragic story. Very similar to the story I learned as a child. Fairy tales weren't the happy-ending Disneyesque stories they are nowadays.. I used to wonder why all the fairy tale stories we were told were so horrific! Always children being mistreated and other such tragedies...Grimm's tales were quite grim! Hans Christian Anderson wrote The Little Mermaid I believe ... and he also wrote my other old favorite tearjerker-The Little Match Girl- Do kids still know this story these days? Let's see if I can remember it...This poor girl was dressed pretty much in rags- no coat- she was outside downtown in the snow begging for money or food. She had a few stick matches. You see, this was like over 100 years ago. There weren't lighters... This was her job every day rain or shine to sell matches to feed her family. She was told to sell them to make some money to bring home- and NOT to return until she gets money. I think it was Christmas- and she was starving too. It was getting later and later- People were just rushing past her, not even bothering to stop and notice if she was alright. She'd look in people's windows and see them with their families who loved them- all warm with the fireplace going, loads of food heaped on the dining tables... she'd daydream about being invited in, being fed by nice people... She was so cold and it was so late, she decided to light just one match. Her fingers were so cold and frozen they hurt her terribly. When she lit it, it was like instant joy- for a minute- she warmed her fingers, barely. and imagine how nice it must be for the people in their warm homes- eating that wonderful food...Then the match died.. She knew she didn't dare go home until she sold some matches...This goes on and on.....The longer she's out there the colder she gets and lights a match occasionally because she's just too cold...It's SO sad because by morning she's found frozen to death just sitting huddled up in someones doorway - out there on Christmas Day, the Poor Little Match Girl. There's a chance I'm leaving something out- Its been many many years since I read the story...but I think that's pretty much it... Well, there goes my second post! Sad one! I'll have to make the others happier!

I know this story it's really sad I forgot it's name (>.<). Anyways that story of Little Mermaid is a bit different at the fairy tale. . .

Kissu
07-14-2008, 04:27 AM
i'm always a classic movie gurly though~ ;O"