The Writing Contest - Round One

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Hellazza peeps, time to vote for your favourite story. Six people have entered their stories in the Writing Contest thread and this is where you eliminate two people, leaving four to go into the next round. Hope you real all of the stories and vote on which is best written, more interesting or to your liking.

Stories will be up soon.

Oh dang I forgot, how do you attatch a poll once you've posted a thread?? Pleae help, someone xD

I'll put the stories up so you can start deciding.

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By missrandom

A black silhouette stood motionlessly against the pale silver moonlight. The only features visible were a small pony tail placed at the top of its head and a long silver metal line which started at the top of it’s right shoulder, and diagonally went down to it’s left leg and curled round it, ending just before it’s knee. The sound of footsteps approached. Its right hand hovered just above where the metal line started, and the left next to it’s left knee. Footsteps grew louder and louder. It began to unscrew the end tip of the metal line.
“Freeze,” growled a voice from behind it.
It made a jabbing movement with the tip of the metal line, and swiftly threw it at towards the voice. The tip had miraculously turned into a long pointed silver stick. The stick pierced through the body, and returned to the silhouette in form of the silver tip. There was a dull thump as the body slumped onto the floor. It pulled a small stone from the pocket of the body, and tucked on the inside of its shoe. The silhouette clicked its fingers, and a silver motorbike appeared. It put its foot down, and sped of into the night.

The motorbike reappeared in a small worn down looking pizza place. It took of its black material facemask, revealing a slender pretty face with shocking grey eyes. Its name was Narinta. Her grey eyes were soon hidden by black sunglasses. She ran cautiously towards an old fashioned till. Glancing around, Narinta punched in a fast combination of numbers, and hit the open button. The ground opened up beneath her feet, and she disappeared without a sound.

Narinta landed nimbly on the dully illuminated floor. In front of her was a pathway, and at the end was a huge black swivel chair. A sharp voice rose above the faint noise of cars overhead.
“Did you get it?”
Unnerved, Narinta walked gracefully up to the chair, and placed the stone on the armrest of the chair.
“Did you really think I’d come without it?” she replied, her voice smooth and quiet.
“You may be one of the best, but even the best fail. You have lessons in 1 hour. The winged pod will take you to your room in 3, 2, 1.”
Suddenly, Narinta was swallowed in a black winged oval, which dropped into a hole in the floor, and was gone.










By Darkshard678

Kellen practiclly choked on her own breath. Thump. Thump. Thump. This was the wonderful sound of the soles of her shoes hitting the cement and she ran, no, she flew. Running through the cold of the morning on a the third week of November. She gradually slowed until she practiclly skidded to a stop. She had to grab hold of the stopsign poled to stop herself. The Chicago wind did not make the weather better for Kellen, a sixth grader in Glenwood Middle school. She had to sprint down to the bus stop just to beat the bus down to the bus stop. Kellen leaned and put all of her weight on her nearby best friend, Hayden. He glanced at her and started walking up the stairs to the bus.

Hayden shoved Kellen into her own seat and sat down in his own, across the aisle and behind her. She stared at him until he looked at her. "What?" he asked. "What's the matter?" Kellen asked. "Whadd'ya mean 'What's the matter?' ?" Hayden grouched. "You're in a bad mood." she retorted. Hayden rolled his eyes. "No, I ain't." he said. "Hayden," Kellen said, "Ain't isn't a word." "It is now." He said. Kellen leaned back in her seat and pondered. 'Why's he so mad?' she thought. Davis Ferder turned around in his seat and leaned over it to look at Hayden. "You and your girfriend in a fight, Hayduhn?" he mocked. "She ain't my girlfriend." Hayden muttered.








By Mewmewmelody
The Opened Heart Finale


Michelle Looked at The Gleaming Moon of the Night escaping from the Enthusiastic crowd in the City where her Beloved Jason was.The poor Loving soul was Alone in the woods holding her Black Umbrella while sitting on a Stump in front of the Moonlight.She took out her Moon Locket and opened it,she took out the small golden Crescent and held it to the Moon.It Gleamed so Brightly that the Whole forest was shining.Around the Town Center,Jason looked ahead of the Gleaming Forest and ran towards it.He looked around for Michelle and he Saw her holding the Cresent and singing a Soft Melody.He hid behind a Tree and just looked at what was happening.Michelle's Crescent stopped glowing as she finished her soft Melody.She held the Crescent next to her Beating heart.Jason came out from hiding behind the Tree.Just now,Michelle looked around to see if anyone was around and just when turned to the next Tree,she spotted Jason.Jason looked away blushing.Michelle gave a Faintly smile on her Weak pale face."so,you came back for me."said Michelle quietly."yes i did,i couldn't stand to leave my friend behind."you consider me as a Friend?"asked Michelle softly."yes i do."said Jason as he walked a bit further to Michelle.Michelle shyly Blushed." i would also consider you as a Friend as well."said Michelle as she got up and walked over to Jason.Then she hugged him."you're the only friend that would understand me for who i am."whispered Michelle.Jason sighed and returned the Hug."Are you sure that you would stay in the world of the living?"asked Jason." I think not."said Michelle."why?"asked Jason."The Spell will curse me for too long,If I Stay,then i might disappear forever and never come back."cried Michelle softly."but won't you come back?"asked Jason again." I Might,if we find the cure.Then I Will return to live as a Living person and not a Soul."said Michelle."well,thats good news because i Never want to leave you behind."said Jason hugging her More tightly."I'll never leave you behind,I'll stay with you for the Rest of my life."said Michelle as tears of joy came out."um...Michelle can i tell you one thing?"asked Jason."sure,anything."said Michelle."I wanted to say this but,i'm afraid that you won't like me so i'll tell you this,I Love You,Michelle Warden."said Jason as he Broke the hug.Michelle stood there,Her dream came true."I'm sorry if i said it,but still i don't want to break our Friendship apart."said Jason as she looked down ashamed."But Jason,I love you too."said Michelle.Jason head lifted up and they both hugged for the last time till Michelle Had to Leave.The Couple Hugged in the Moonlight and as the Souls returned flying away.Michelle lets go of Jason and kissed him on the Cheek."I'll come back one day,to fufill my Eternal Love,and My Marriage."said Michelle as she gave one last look to Jason.She took out her Golden Crescent and held it next to her heart.She disappeared in front of Jason's eyes.He looked around Michelle wasn't there.All he saw was Michelle's Golden Crescent.Jason looked up to the Moon."she'll come back......she'll come back."said Jason as he held the Golden Crescent next to his heart.A Memory pictured in his Mind where they first met,in the Spot where they were.He still looked at the Moon and pictured Michelle's Beautiful face in the Moon.

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By Fall_Out_Boy
I watched frozen in place as the woman with a face of an angel slowly came towards me. "It's a beautiful night for a walk isn't it, sir?" she asked her voice fell and rose with the ocean waves in the distance. I nodded my head confused and slightly lost. Behind her the lights flickered on the pineapple fountian and the ocean waves crashed onto shore. I saw her mouth move ,but I couldn't hear what she was saying. The only thing I could hear was waves crashing and an occasional caw of a bird.
Then inbetween the cawing and crashing I heard the woman say, "vampire." I looked at her about to say something but it got lodged in my throat. She came closer smiling, her eyes were clouded with a mixture of hate and hunger. It was a blood thirsty hunger, which sent blood freezing chills down my spine. I tryed to scream for help, but the words lodged in my throat stopped it. The woman leaned in towards my shoulder. I heard her mutter, "I'm sorry," but I wasn't a hundred percent sure. Suddenly something punctured my shoulder and it started to burn like hell.
Finally the words stuck in my throat came out. "Vampire?" The fire ran down my arm to the tips of my fingers, the burning stopped leaving my arm numb. It ran down my legs and other arm, making me completely numb. I collasped to the ground unable to move and everything became blurry. Slowly the burning pain ran up my neck.I watched as the woman dashed off, leaving me to die. Soon it became dark, I don't remember if I closed my eyes or if I became temporently blind.










By Evol
The dim moonlight was talking to me - 'You shouldn't have run away, I told you so, you shouldn't have run away'. Tears fluttered on my cheeks with the speed of the wind. The air smelt of fear and lies, all mixed in with teh beautiful scenery of a winters night. My trainers cracked against the spindly twigs as my knees gave way and the earth slapped my front, my face. Blood splurted from my nose like a fountain and I lay there, still, crying. My eyes fixed their gaze on a foot infront of me, creeping their way upwards. His hairy legs came into view, then his shorts, then a t-shirt and leather jacket, strong arms with various tatoos. I flinched when I saw his face, his handsome good-looks would fool anyone. But not me.

My eyes slipped out of focus as a bullet cut into my back.

There was a bright light infront of me, blaring into view. Heaven? Was I dead? I couldn't feel any pain. The light suddenly had something round it - a lampshade. Then a table came into view, with flowers, lots of flowers. My favourite dog teddy was sitting next to me on the pillow, his nose snuffled into my hair.

Faces then appeared infront of me, a masked man saying something to a small girl with golden curls and a warm, rosy-cheeked face. Elouisa looked at me and squealed with joy.

"Cheryl! Cheryl! CHERYL! You're okay!" she squealed with delight and excitement. I smiled, which caused me pain and my face curled into an ugly grimace.

I tried to sit up, but the doctor pushed me back onto my pillow, softly but firmly. I tried to swing my legs over the side of the bed but I suddenly couldn't feel them any more, and I couldn't move them either.

What had happeded to me? I tried to bend my left leg, wiggle my toes, kick out with my foot, but nothing happened. I reached out to touch them with my hand, and they were still there. They felt normal, but why weren't they? I screamed, and nurses came running, along with my family.

"WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS?!?!" I roared at people, still screaming.

My mum stroked my hair and tweaked my ear, and I stopped screaming, because she hadn't done that in years. I felt light and carefree, but I was still here, in Manchester Park hospital, sobbing and asking people why my legs weren't functioning.

"Don't tell her," the doctor whispered, but not quiet enough.

"DON'T TELL ME WHAT? WHAT HAPPENED TO MY LEGS! I WANT TO GO HOME! HELP! WHAT HAPPENED TO TONY?! DOD HE DO THIS? I WANT TO MOVE MY LEGS!" I sobbed, screaming my head off. The small girl in the bed next to me was looking at me, as was the boy opposite me.

"You've been paralysed, sweetie. It's Tony's fault," mum whispered, stroking my hair.

My world fell apart.

[Dark_Melody]

Hi Evol! Its Me,MewMelody,I Got in another account because since i've never been here for weeks.Anyway,you spelled my name wrong,its actually,MewMelody.To Make a Poll,you might go to the Thread tools up above the thread.

[ThatAnimeKid]

You forgot mine! Oh, well! Time to go eat some Funyuns and tell myself to keep drawing. ^^=

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Did you post it? I didn't see it there... Sorry if you did, you can be in the next contest there should be after this if you want xD?? I think if there will be one it would be a while yet though...

[Star_Spark]

(I'm always honest.)
Can I enter my story too?

[.:Fob:.]

Oh this is how you planned to find the winner. I have to give you credit on how well you planned this all out. I probably won't vote though. All this people are really good writers that have diffrent styles. I must think hard to pick one. 0M0

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If tehre's a next one, star.

Yeah, this is how the competitions work on the other forum I go on if the host has submitted their own entry. Or they can choose themselves.

[honeybee345]

It wsa so descriptive.

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Okay, so me and MewMelody have to battle it out in another poll!

[lyndasis]

sucre fantastique stories
theyre making my imagination run wild omg!someone catch it ,lol
but seriously my heads flooding with ideas
ooo i wanna enter in a contest too!!!!!

[hunnybee1992]

i liked them all!
u guys are good writers <33
that would be cool to start a story forum on here ^^