evol
05-31-2008, 03:34 PM
Okay, so this is a story where people carry it on, and we go on from there. It's not an RP.
So there's two girls, a mouse and an eagle. The eagle has powers and can talk, and can transform into either a whale or a tiger, but he must be holding Kaysa's charm bracelet, and the mouse is just your above-average teenage mouse, that can talk and walk on two legs. Basically a breed between a human and a mouse, as the mouse is the size of a newborn baby, but can shrink smaller.
One of the girls, Kaysa, is only eleven years old. She has short hair like a boys haircut that can stick up fashionably over her head in girls style, brown with the occasional blonde stuck in. Her eyes are big and imaginative and a beautiful jewel-bright hazel, and she's got cheekbones and is quite tall and skinny. She looks around thirteen. She's smart in writing and art but can't be bothered with maths and geography, authough she likes history aswel. She once tried to pierce her ears with a needle and a wet cloth, but ended up going to the hospital with an infection, and that made her smart enough not to go along with the plan of doing her nose and tounge too. She is fearless but can't really fight and gets herself into all sorts of trouble in the skate park.
The other girl, Leelee, is thirteen years old, and is Kaysa's best friend. She thought Kaysa was her age, but was mistaken, bit she liked her anyway, as Kaysa also acts old for her age too. She's small and middle-sized around her stomach, quite comfortable with her appearance. She hasn;t got Kaysa's junior-model looks, but she's happy. All her family are quite fat and lazy, but even though she's been fed more than the average child, she's managed to keep a reasonable figure. Nobody would really call her fat. She can pack a good punch and blab her way out of anything atall, but is girly and dosen't like picking fights and won't get herself dirty. She flips every time she breaks a nail.
These girls one day go to Leelee's house for tea only to discover nobody home. When they walk into the garden they discover a time hole and have to explore more. Hanging onto eachother, they jump in.
Through the time hole they pop out in a different land, one covered with snow and ice, and a mouse/human (Fin) and and an eagle (Ju) have been transported to the same place, growing magic powers as they go. Kaysa also finds out her charm bracelet is able to transform animals too, and Ju depends on it to transform. So the foursome stick together to survive against all things dangerous and perilous and try to find a way out.
ALSO - Once they find a way out the story will end, but I want it to go on for atleast a a few months first.
Okay, so you can write the rest, just keep teh characters to their personalities. If anyone dosen't keep to the writing style, writes the grammar obviously incorrectly (AKA i, to many caps, long sentances using commas and and, numbers using 1234 not onetwothreefour, or if it's written in a different style AKA first person, different tense, or changes the characters personality. If you don't think you are up to writing the way it is written then PLEASE DON'T POST YOUR WRITING.) You write in third person and the style the first person writes and the past tense, unless it's a diary entry.
Also: It's set in the past, so no mobile phones or computers, because there wouldn't be any in the land anyway. It's a bit luike narnia, except less trees, and no ice princess.
You can carry it on and use any charcter, keepng to the rules, and can have them do whatever you want, introduce new characters (that anyone can control, but they must not be made into a main character).
So I'll write after the first person has started it.
It starts when Kaysa and Leelee come into the house.
So there's two girls, a mouse and an eagle. The eagle has powers and can talk, and can transform into either a whale or a tiger, but he must be holding Kaysa's charm bracelet, and the mouse is just your above-average teenage mouse, that can talk and walk on two legs. Basically a breed between a human and a mouse, as the mouse is the size of a newborn baby, but can shrink smaller.
One of the girls, Kaysa, is only eleven years old. She has short hair like a boys haircut that can stick up fashionably over her head in girls style, brown with the occasional blonde stuck in. Her eyes are big and imaginative and a beautiful jewel-bright hazel, and she's got cheekbones and is quite tall and skinny. She looks around thirteen. She's smart in writing and art but can't be bothered with maths and geography, authough she likes history aswel. She once tried to pierce her ears with a needle and a wet cloth, but ended up going to the hospital with an infection, and that made her smart enough not to go along with the plan of doing her nose and tounge too. She is fearless but can't really fight and gets herself into all sorts of trouble in the skate park.
The other girl, Leelee, is thirteen years old, and is Kaysa's best friend. She thought Kaysa was her age, but was mistaken, bit she liked her anyway, as Kaysa also acts old for her age too. She's small and middle-sized around her stomach, quite comfortable with her appearance. She hasn;t got Kaysa's junior-model looks, but she's happy. All her family are quite fat and lazy, but even though she's been fed more than the average child, she's managed to keep a reasonable figure. Nobody would really call her fat. She can pack a good punch and blab her way out of anything atall, but is girly and dosen't like picking fights and won't get herself dirty. She flips every time she breaks a nail.
These girls one day go to Leelee's house for tea only to discover nobody home. When they walk into the garden they discover a time hole and have to explore more. Hanging onto eachother, they jump in.
Through the time hole they pop out in a different land, one covered with snow and ice, and a mouse/human (Fin) and and an eagle (Ju) have been transported to the same place, growing magic powers as they go. Kaysa also finds out her charm bracelet is able to transform animals too, and Ju depends on it to transform. So the foursome stick together to survive against all things dangerous and perilous and try to find a way out.
ALSO - Once they find a way out the story will end, but I want it to go on for atleast a a few months first.
Okay, so you can write the rest, just keep teh characters to their personalities. If anyone dosen't keep to the writing style, writes the grammar obviously incorrectly (AKA i, to many caps, long sentances using commas and and, numbers using 1234 not onetwothreefour, or if it's written in a different style AKA first person, different tense, or changes the characters personality. If you don't think you are up to writing the way it is written then PLEASE DON'T POST YOUR WRITING.) You write in third person and the style the first person writes and the past tense, unless it's a diary entry.
Also: It's set in the past, so no mobile phones or computers, because there wouldn't be any in the land anyway. It's a bit luike narnia, except less trees, and no ice princess.
You can carry it on and use any charcter, keepng to the rules, and can have them do whatever you want, introduce new characters (that anyone can control, but they must not be made into a main character).
So I'll write after the first person has started it.
It starts when Kaysa and Leelee come into the house.